User talk:BobTheDoctor27

Matoro58: Vendetta
So it's all on Tollubo. How dos this relate to Vunto or Tanish?

MATORO58

Yeah. I meant Rola. Wasn't her name Sarnii's first name?

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 22:25, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: Selac
Can you check out a page of mine called Selac on CBW?

MATORO58

Sorry I took so long to message. I was tied in these previous days.

So with Selac, I didn't plan this at first, but I want to feature him in Degeneration a Ko-Matoran who is filled with ambition for power and wants to steal the Ignika. Additionally, now that I think of it, I might have to extend the role of Tourik from a small cameo into a minor character. the reason is I want to make a scene where Selac is shown trying to steal the Ignika but ends up having to suffer eternal pain and live forever, breaking his spirit and pride in the process. Now however (This is optional), if you like how I stated Selac in this way, it's your choice if you think of featuring him in Tourik's Fractures Universe guide. Remember, it's your choice.

MATORO58

I'll change that. Selac won't be on Jovan's team, but will be transformed into a Toa by the Ignika, and will have to suffer a living damination. Howver, now that I think of it, I want the last part of Degeneration to have Pouks, Selac, and Alicaer go with Jovan's team to retrieve the Ignika. That means I'll have to make Tourik's role bigger, and Autolycus, Prozuke, and Vormahk will appear. And this might mean the inclusion of two more Toa, one that wear an Olmak, and one that sacrifices themself with the Ignika.

Tell me what you think

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:14, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

P.S. I mentioned Vacca-Nui in the Esnidar article.

I'll ask Toa Hydros if I could.

So for the two toa, I don't think a Toa of Iron would work as a Sacrifice for the Ignika. I was thinking more of a Toa of Air. And as for the Female Olmak wearer, the Olmak is in a gold color, so I'm kind of sure for that toa, it's a Toa of Psioncs.

I was at first thinking Tollubo should go with the Toa instead of Alicaer, but then I realized that they would go to Karda-Nui, where the Av-Matoran lived, and since Tollubo's an Av-Matoran, it would be unwise.

All the rest sounds good. Tell me soon.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 17:12, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

What I mean with Tollubo, is that if Tollubo went to Karda-Nui, he might've met some Av'Matoran and they could've spoiled his past.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 23:06, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

I have a question: Are Thode and Goylo appearing in Vendetta?

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 13:55, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I got what you said. Now I have a question for you.

Now you've read the published parts of Degeneration, and you've read that the scene where Tollubo meets Pouks is after Pouks got into a fight with a fight with a Fa-Matoran called Fadar. And I've recently seen on Brickshelf how there a bunch of VoyaToran you don't have a use for and you're allowing someone to use them. I thought they could be Fadar's followers and have them as antagonists who want to beat up  kill Tollubo, Pouks, Nihdiki, Dume, and Krakua.

Tell me your answer soon!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 01:55, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 20:57, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Hey bobby, I have a question. So I found out you replaced Varna with Orde, because you'd confuse it with Sonitous. But this left me thinking that in the Core Bionicle universe, then how does Orde surive? Unless if Cobarox (It's pretty obvious) didn't survive.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:00, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

Well, that proves Cobarox killed Orde.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 00:48, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Well, if it's not Cobarox, then I think it's pretty obvious "Terminator" killed Orde

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:19, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Its not a guess. It's logic. Orde was killed during the Toa-Dark Hunter war along with Glon. And as you know, it's very unlikely that any Cult of Darkness member was on Metru-Nui at the time. We know that a matoran wouldn't be able to kill Orde, and that Vunto and Curatio were probably on Mevock, that Juulant and Mudro were on Bara Magna, and that the rest of the Cult were on the southern islands. "Terminator" was a Dark Hunter participating at Metru-Nui in the war, so it's most likely that he murdered Orde. And since you've confirmed he would be killed off in   J-day, he was the murder of Orde and Glon and his well punishment is the same fate. That's how I figured out he would most likely would've killed Orde and Glon.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 01:49, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Well, all you've cofirmed for J-Day is that either Turas, Goll, or Kyros will die and that Glonor and Ninian will play important roles in the beginning of J-Day. And for that, I have a question about Tollubo: Is he going to have a new disguise?

Let me know soon!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:35, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, so I have a question: can I use some of your characters in another wiki. It's only for one thing on it, and I'm want to use them just to add badass characters.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:28, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

For the disguise, I think that he shouldn't wear his Over Your Shoulder disguise the whole time. He should wear three disguises: The one he starts off with, the Over Your Shoulder, and a different one.

The other wiki is another Fanon wiki, but there's little bionicle topics in there. I want to use your characters for this page called Nazo Unleashed, where it's like a crossover of some things and there's very few bionicle things in there. The only characters I would use would be Tollubo and his counterpart, Varis, Glonor, Mudro, Kentis, Bioka, and Karabak.

I hope you're good with that.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 23:37, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

I'm okay with it.

Still, you've havn't answered my question of adding a third disguise.

Can you also read the thirteenth chapter of Legends of Anarchy? I finished it today.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 23:14, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Well, the main plot of Legends of Anarchy is that Jiirka wants to awaken a weapon she created 60,000 years ago. So the main characters set off on a journey to the north, and I have to say this story's better than World of Hell. Additionally, I've put in some flashbacks of how Jiirka came to Bara Magna and her Downfall.

Now I have a question to ask you.

I have lots of Hero Factory parts, and it left me thinking whether or not I should join the Custom Hero Factory wiki. I also made two Hero factory 2010 styled MOCs. So tell me if I should join CHFW (Custom Hero Factory wiki)

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 20:37, June 27, 2013 (UTC)

O.K. I'm starting now!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 01:48, June 28, 2013 (UTC)

Hey bobby, can Knox and Orsta make an appearance in The Last Stand? I took care of the Av-Matoran problem, because in the Damned Desert Universe, Jiirka brought Av-Matoran with her to Bara Magna, as her slaves.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:44, July 1, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, though Knox doesn't have any roles. He'll just be seen as a dead body. Orsta, however, is playing a slightly bigger role because of something at the end of the last stand. I can say he will be killed off. However, I am not wrapping up my story from there. There are plans for something much bigger... I finally managed to get to my account. I'm doing this from my IPad mini, so sorry for the delay. Matoro58

Okay, got it. Now I have a favor for you. If you looked in one of our previous disscussions, you'll notice I mentioned a Ta-Matoran named Alicaer. He became a Toa on Pouks' Toa team and died of unknown ways. I've already made his fixed matoran moc (I still need to order the orange Mahiki), but I don't have enought pieces to make a whole Toa form of him. Can you manage to build a Toa form of Alicaer? Matoro58.

Hmmm...Well, I'm not sure you'd want to create mata red parts, considering I want Alicaer in a Toa Metru build. Can you make the Mahiki black instead? Because I noticed some of the canon Ta-Matoran wear black masks.

Anyway, I'll just say for his Toa tool, I think a 2008 Takanuva styled weapon would fit him.

I've read Vendetta, and it seemed nice to me. I know for a fact that Thode and Vunto will play a role in the epilogue.

See ya!

Matoro58!

Well, for Alicaer, his thighs and upper arms could be used from those Lhikan ones. For his shoulder and thigh armor, I think the armor should be black. Now his feet should be black as well, and like I did with Pouks' moc, add shin guards. Now for his wrists, they should be in a Hagahish form. You don't need to add real hands. Those joints are okay.

As for Vendetta, the best thing for inspiration that I always do is read Frozen Calling. It really is the crown jewel of your storyline.

My theories are that either Vunto or Thode will be involved to kill Sidorak.

See ya!

Matoro58

You bet! Frozen Calling is one hell of an awesome, badass story.

Anyways, I have a feeling that Sidorak will be dead by the end of the epilogue.

Matoro58!

Hmmm...I've read Chapter 12 of Falling in the Black, but it says Nuvhok-kal instead of Bohrok X. Why did you change it?

Matoro58

What's a Dalek?

Matoro58

Okay, I read the Toa Valmai page, and it seems that you revealed that Lothorna and Artaudo were the two unknown Toa. I also saw that you added Selac to the roster, even though you said it's not plausible for him to do all the events in his biography.

I'm also concerned about Degeneration, because first off, I never intended to transform Lothorna into a Toa and for her to wear an Olmak. Second of all, this means I might need to include Carnac, Artaudo, and Autolycus, even though you said I can't include any more of your characters in my stories. Third, I'm not sure if I can have Lothorna and Selac get Toa stones, because both were sent Karzahni in my storyline. However, I can have them transformed into Toa through some sort of accident. The last thing is that you said Selac won't be included in Tourik's Fractures universe guide. However, now that you've changed Autolycus' element, this leaves me with lots of questions.

Overall, I think you made some pretty nice changes that got my attention.

Matoro58

Well, I'm guessing that in the majority of alternate universes, Lothorna became a Toa. However, if she originated from the same island as Selac (Who originated from Metru Nui, I recently changed that.), then Tourik, Autolycus, Artaudo, and Vormahk would also have to originate from Metru-Nui, which isn't possible, seeing that Tourik is a Toa of Plantlife, and there isn't a Bo-Metru in existence in both of our story lines.

Maybe Lothorna, Vormahk, Tourik, Artaudo, and Autolycus can originate from the same island or landmass, but Selac can't seeing as he was sent to Karzahni. He became a Toa in an accident, and joined the Toa Valmai on Voya Nui to help them get used to it's harsh terrain.

I don't think you answered two of my questions thoroughly, if Autolycus, Artaudo, and Carnac can appear in Degeneration, and if Selac will have an appearance in Tourik's Fractures universe guide.

As for the Selac moc, I'm okay with you making it, but don't go too far on it like Tourik's revamp, but not as bland as the Toa inika sets. The Kualus Kaneohe will work, and a post 2006 Toa style body will work.

Thanks, Matoro58

Maybe Selac can look like your Matoro revamp, like white and light blue. And for his Axe, maybe the other half of the Axonn axe could work; you used one half of the axe for Bioka's weapon.

Maybe I can make an exception to have transform Lothorna into a Toa in Degenertion. Selac will be transformed into one because of an accident, why not for Lothorna? And basically, now that I think of it, Degeneration is going to help color some of the Toa Valmai's past. Carnac won't play any big roles. He'll hardly have any lines at all, and won't go in the cave.

Basically, to me, Degeneration is some sort of 2006-ish king of story, due to Karzahni, fixed Matoran, and Jovan's team, and I've noticed it has some similarities to Falling in the Black.

Toa Hydros hasn't responded to me when I asked him if I could use Prozuke and Vormahk, and that just puts me in deep thought whether or not I should bring in Prozuke and Vormahk.

See ya!

Matoro58

Well, I got it about Selac's MOC

Now, since the Damned Desert Universe doesn't take on any great changes, I'm keeping the Toa Valmai the Same. And is this good for Tourik? "Mask of Life? What's life useful for, anyway?"

We won't see much of Carnac. I know he's not fixed, due to Zero Hour.

That's all, except for this Vilnius Meme suggestion:

The Saddest Moment in a child's life isn't when they learn Sant Claus isn't real, it's when thy learn...Turaga Vilnius is...

Hope you like this!

Matoro58

Hmm, maybe this can work for Tourik:

Carnac: We're approaching Mount Valmai, which erupts usually 

Tourik: ''Great. Just what we need. More deaths.''

Carnac: I don't get it

Tourik: ''Of course not. I'm busy now, so can I ignore you some other time?''

Yeah, I know about the quote I mentioned, but maybe it could work for Thode; I mean, you didn't build a badass Toa of Plasma for nothing.

Hope you like this

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:45, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

I released another part of Degeneration today. I think you'll like this new part

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:21, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks! :D

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 17:28, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

I noticed that both Torlo and Glonor's fractures counterpart are going to appear in Zero Hour. You've also confirmed one of the Falling in the Black or Zero Hour matoran is Glonor's counterpart in disguise. But if Torlo isn't the counterpart then these are my other suspects: Tell me what you think of it!
 * Vancha
 * Goll -He lived on the Tren Krom peninsula
 * Outo
 * Iolan -Glonor beat him up
 * Sonitus' fractures counterpart

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:23, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, I have a question, when will Kazat reappear? You said he will be reappearing in the Fractures universe to find Tollubo.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:47, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Okay.

Now, I'm concerned about Zero Hour. It's said on the page that it will coming out later this month, but the last thing you said about it was that you hardly completed it. It puts me thinking, when will Zero Hour come out?

Additionally, It also makes think when will the end of Falling in the Black be revealed. All of the fans at CBW are waiting. So I'll put in my predictions here:
 * Iolan will be killed off
 * Torlo won't forgive Sarnii and kills her in vengance
 * Pofia and Ramonda will appear in the epilogue
 * Gorta will also appear in the epilogue
 * The missile is going to strike at Mount Valmai and cause a volcanic explosion
 * Glonor's fractures counterpart will appear
 * Makuta Scarla will make a brief appearance in the epilogue
 * Bohrok X will kill off Caliga
 * Santis turns out to be the first Toa of Fire in the Core Bionicle Universe, as a member of the hand of Artakha and was exiled for rebelling against them
 * Toa Jekkai's grave will be found
 * A new matoran will be introduced, who will join The Warbound in the future
 * The Bohrok X's master plan is to Destroy Karda Nui, killing Mata Nui
 * The Avohkii will be referenced, or seen in the Flashback
 * Toa Merra will be found, and killed by Tahnok-Kal

Let me know soon!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:18, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Well, an early happy birthday to you.

About Glonor's fractures counterpart, I saw a picture in the recent photos that featured Dorvan as a matoran. It said BTD27 Dorvan Zero Hour 01.JPG and he was holding what looked like the Avohkii's fractures form.So techinically, he was a character who we never saw in your storyline, but in Vorred's.

Hope this is true! ;)

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 01:59, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Well, if not Dorvan, then at first I thought it was Bioka, but that goes against what you told me earlier, as well as when he demonstrated his power in chapter 8 of Whispers in the Dark.

By the way, I read in a blog post that it's inspired from the Green Day song Boulevard of Broken dreams. I've heard it before, so nice work.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:23, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Ironically, there are some bionicle tributes on Youtube with the Boulevard of Broken Dreams song. I also like some other green day songs as well.

And on that note, I just want to put my opinions on the Zero Hour predictions. Please not these are my answers. That's all for now. See ya!
 * True, Jekkai has masks set by Lugat
 * Maybe, Salu might be involved in a fight with Cobarox
 * Unknown
 * Unknown
 * True, he is also confirmed to appearin Turaga form
 * Maybe, Dredzek was also involved, as well as other Makuta
 * False, Salaak survives to become head of the Metru Nui land army
 * Unknown
 * Unknown
 * Unknown
 * Maybe, Dorvan is included and is noted to die but reappear in J-Day
 * True, the story is inspired by Vorred's Uprising saga and Chicken Bond due to Scarla's appearance
 * Maybe, an infected Akaku was shown in a blog post
 * True, he smuggles the Avohkii away

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:43, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah...I forgot about Sonitous. Basically, he is a character you're allowed to use as well, because you made his MOC. I also have three questions for you: That's all for now! :)
 * 1) Is Sonitous going to appear in J-Day
 * 2) Santis quoted "Onu-Matoran are full of Surprises" Which reminds me of Tiam...Is it possible he met the Onu-Matoran during his dimensional travels?
 * 3) In Tollubo's vision during OYS, he sees a red Jultin in his vision...does Scarla wear a Jultin?

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 02:04, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

No Problem, though I'm still sure a Jultin would fit Scarla the best.

I'm still wondering when Tourik's Fractures guide will come out. Most of your fanboys the users at CBW are waiting to see it(If they haven't forgot about it).

See ya!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:55, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe.

I'm in a nutshell here. The big plans I mentioned in a recent talk with you here is about an alternate universe very similar to the fractures universe. Except for some minor and Major differences. Now I've planned most of the elements of most of the stories and their names, check it out: The arc will be called the Downfall Arc. The main character will be a Toa of Fire who looks a Hell lot like Thode (His character's not only like Thode's but also like Skorr's) and he's from Jara-Nui, the same island as Esnidar.
 * Metru Nui is the only safe heaven. Anything else looks like Judgement day from Terminator happened (Yes I did watch it and the second movie.)
 * Although I'm not a supporter of it, drugs and cigarettes will be used.
 * Matoran will be able to reproduce (I'm cutting that from Degeneration)
 * The Girdis Makuta will be the main antagonist, except I changed his name to Vesper
 * A new spieces will be introduced, one that can reincarnate as long as they have remains left.
 * There are at least twenty Toa still alive, but most of them will be outside the area of Metru Nui.
 * The Toa of lightning I mentioned will also make her debut (Although she'll be killed off anyways)
 * 1: Into the Nothing: The first story
 * 2: Top gun: A story sort of a combiner of Falling in the the Black and Frozen Calling, except instead of an airship crash and Termination of the matoran spieces, it'll be a Rexidian (A type of liquid I'll introduce) bomb drop to blow up the matoran universe.
 * 3: Dear Agony: A story involving drunk men, drugs, very insulting and nasty curses, and the occansional sex (The latter not being shown)
 * 4: In too Deep: Somewhat of a story form of Zero Hour except has more differences than Zero Hour
 * 5: Shadow of the Night: A story that takes place 513 years before the events of Into the Nothing. It portrays how Toa Hylla became a Toa, something I'll revisit in the opening chapters of In the End.
 * 6: War: inspired a bit by Vendetta but mostly by Punishment
 * 7: In the End: The last story serial in this arc

Vesper's plan is use a machine called Doomsday Device, invented by a great being called Cemus, who will be introduced in the Last Stand (But was mentioned in legends of anarchy). The machine can cause weather changes, reverse the rotation of a planet, tamper with tectonic plates and cause Volcanic eruptions, tidal waves, avalanches, and if extended to it's full power, reverse the effects of gravity.

The main villians are a group of criminal like the Cult of Darkness, but their leader is a Toa of Shadow. They also have a young Skakdi of psioncs (A female) who has a few similarities with Lothorna, but is evil and at the age of 16.

Now while I'm excited to write this, I'm also a bit impatient. The last stand isn't anywhere close to being finished, and while I like writing, I also want to finish it so I can get started with this, but I feel like I want to start it now.

Please tell me what do you think.

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:29, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Wow, I didn't know there was a villain from James Bond called Vesper. No; he is the name of an antagonist from this book series called ''The 39 Clues. ''It' some mystery series about these two orphans who travel the world (American) and find secrets hidden about famous people in the history of the world. Read the first book, The Maze of Bones, I can assure that you will like it.

One of the couples I plan on introducing is Hewkii and Macku. It goes like this: Twenty years before: Hewkii and Macku married. Fifteen:  Had a child. Thirteen: Had another child. Ten: Hewkii became a toa. Three weeks: Macku recieved the news she dreaded: Her husband was dead. This relationship plays a role in Top Gun.

The species I'm introducing are called the Vudak species. A representative of them is Rokadu. They walk on four legs, have faces that look horribly like skulls (I bet you can guess which face I'll be using) Tails with chain maces at the end. And their reincarnations are referred to as an evolution. In their third evolution, they become hunchbacks. In their seventh, they become Bohrok.

The reason for drugs and cigarettes is because in most movies such as Terminator, they use them. I think I'll refer to them as Smoke pipes.

The Toa of Lightning's name is Aliyra. And I don't think you'll like her Moc...she wears a Kaukau. :P


 * She's walking down a street when a Black and Blue Toa appears and shoots her.*

I haven't planned a name to this Toa of Shadow, but I've made an awesome MOC of him, as well a small one for the Skakdi. I can also say that Rokadu will be a member, as well as a Skakdi of fire called Hynrek, a member of Ehlek's spieces called Nerhek, a former Dark Hunter Zeverek called "Reaper", and once I get the Krekka set, a Steltian Laboror called Groku. You can expect another Toa, a glatorian, an Upper-class Steltian, and a Vortixx. For now that's all I can tell you about them, but I'll tell you more soon.

The prologue of Into the Nothing surrounds some Toa on the southern continent fighting against Exo-Toa(Very similar to Terminator) who are under the control of Makuta Verahk. Then one of the Toa died and the others retreat. The viewpoint switches to Verahk, and Vesper appears and asks him about a progress report. They have a conversation, and Vesper ends it by saying this:

"We will destroy those Toa. Soon, this hellhole will learn fear. The Universe will learn it. And then..." Vesper picked up another skull and crushed it in his hand."...we will finish them."

Prozuke and Vormahk also appear as Verahk's servants in their Rahaga forms.

That's all for now, so thank you and I hope it satisfies you! ;)

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 00:05, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

The Book genre is either adventure or mystery.

Yeah, I completely forgot about Hewkii and Macku, to be honest. Until I read the first chapter of Vendetta, I forgot about them.

They were originally created by the great being as another one of their failure Krana creations. However, the Brotherhood of Makuta, specifically Mutran and Chirox, became interested with them and experimented with them, so they could be reincarnated into different forms. So for a short period of time, they served the Brotherhood for a short period of time, but became jealous and joined Pridak in the League of the Six Kingdoms. However, in the Core Bionicle Universe, Miserix ordered their exermination and, hence, the species became extinct. In the Downfall alternate universe, they fled the battle and lived on Artidax, therefore they adapted to it's harsh terrain and have known to be the species of the Dark Hunter ''Tracker. However, Rokadu went to island which would one day be known as Visorak.'' When the Visorak invaded, they took him prisoner to Makuta Chirox, who out of rare mercy, spared him, but Rokadu became a lowly servant of the Brotherhood.

About the Hewkii-Macku thing: Hewkii's ''dead. ''Now I beet Macku feels like Laigira from Frozen Calling.

I'm changing the cigarettes name to Smoke tube instead of Smoke pipes; makes me think about Sherlock Holmes.

Takes the Ruru and throws it at Tollubo...Thode appears and shoves it up wear the two suns don't shine.

Unfortunantly, I don't have a blue Ruru of any style. I have a Faxon in Metru-Blue, though.

Wait until you read the backstory for this universe...Teridax does exist, but is dead.

They're called the Vesper Confederacy. You can expect another Skakdi, a mutant Le-Matoran, and a Cybernetic Robot.

Here's another excerpt from ''Into the Nothing. ''This particular part Chapter 3: Part 1

Chapter 3: Part 1
Today was not a good day for Seryai.

He exited the chute station to find his transporter had a fat tire, and when he bent down to inspect it, he was gagged, had his ankles and wrists tied, shoved into a sack, thrown in the back of his transporter, and has been driven across every pothole in Le-Metru.

Worse still, he captives were some green sea eel who walked on two feet, a Skakdi of fire, and a Zeverek missing one eye and instead of a left hand, had an oddly shaped weapon. He was able to hear them, too.

"There's another pothole-"

The transporter lurched forwards, and he screamed.

"Oh, well will that worthless Le-Matoran shut up?!" Shouted a voice.

"Quiet, Nerhek! We'll have some fun with him first. Then we'll be serious!" Said a voice.

"Well, I'm bumping my my head at every pothole, Hynrek, you worthless little piece of sh-"

"Quiet, both of you!" Said a third. "If you two had any decency, you'd be dead by now. But no; Vesper had plans for you two."

"Yeah, you're as worthless as us."

"Hynrek, if you want me to electrocute you, I can do you a favor. 50,000 volts aren't as horrible as you think."

"Didn't you kill a Toa of Iron with that amount of Voltage?"

"Yeah, and the apart from the fact he was horribly wounded? What the hell was his name? Zaria or something?"

"Some Sanok-wearing freak he was."

"We've arrived. Now I'm going to slam on the brakes and..."

The car lurched forwards and Seryai screamed again.

"Sorry. We didn't know you were hurt." Said a voice as his sack was untied. Seryai then was about to scream again until he realized he was looking into the eyes of a Skakdi. Then his gag was ripped out and he was pulled out and had his ankles untied. He then kicked the Skakdi in the face. He was pulled out and thrown on the pavement outside the car. But before he could make a run for it he was yanked back and the skakdi was whispering. "Listen now, we're being nice. So unless if you got anything to live for, we're gunna-"

"LET ME GO OR I'LL SCREAM BLOODY MURDER!!!" He screamed.

Then an eel-like face appeared in front of him."If scream or say that, there will be lots of bloody murder." The eel sneered.

"Quiet." Said a third voice. They looked. The Zeverek had climbed out, and he was holding something.

"Extend your arm." He said. Trembling, Seryai extended it. Almost at once, the Zeverek injected something using a needle. Then he took it out.

"What was that?" Seryai gasped

"Tiny tracking devices. That way, we can keep track of you. By the way, the Skakdi's Hynrek, the sea filth is Nerhek, and even though I do have a real name, you can call me "Reaper"." The Zeverek said. "Now we're going to play nice with you, so obey us. Like we said before, if you have anything to live for, then do our bidding unless if you want there to be bloody murder." The Zeverek said. Seryai nodded reluctantly. "Good. Now here's what you have to do..."

Hope this is good enough!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:10, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

That wasn't the whole chapter. ;)

By the, the Toa of fire's name is Varkon and the Toa of Shadow's is Urodox.

Here's a few more characters: Basically, Hynrek will be seen more of in In too Deep. So so far, he's the only confirmed character for it. Nerhek is going to make a minor appearance in Dear Agony and will be killed off in the prologue of ''In the End. ''"Reaper" was only there to supervise on Urodox's orders. But in the closing chapters of Into the Nothing, he will be caught by the Toa and taken to a prison off the coast of Onu-Metru. But in the Prologue of Dear Agony, "Reaper" will escape the prison and put it on Code Red, so in the opening chapters of Dear Agony, Varkon, Nihdiki, and Kolar will visit the prison, during which they'll have a talk with the warden, Onepu, and Varkon and Nihdiki will be involved in a prison brawl, in which they'll be fighting Krekka and "Savage".
 * Nihdiki- Toa of Air
 * Bomonga- Toa of Earth.
 * Kolar- Matatu-wearing "Fixed" Ko-Matoran
 * Dharma- Kaukau-wearing Le-Matoran (He's no Harma rip-off!)
 * Turaga Ledan- Matatu-wearing Turaga of stone
 * Indiva- Toa of Lightning on the Vesper Confederacy. Her Kanohi is undecided
 * Golroth- Upper-Class Steltian on the Vesper Confederacy
 * Ebrok- Male Skakdi of Plantlife who's an ally of Varkon's
 * Rosan- Male Rode-wearing Toa of Light
 * CT-800- A cybernetic member of Kalmah's species and a member of  the Vesper Confederacy

Gets arrested by law enforcement...due to serve another amount of labors for Metru-Nui.

Maybe a Huna, maybe not. Only Chiara's mask was mentioned.

Do you think I should start in a couple of weeks?

Let me know soon! ;)

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 03:38, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Unfortunately, I have a bad MOC of him so far, but we'll see how it goes.

I think a mask of conjuring or a Suletu would fit him better. However, an aggressive Toa doesn't necessarily have to wear a Pakari. My MOC of Fadar wears a Kadin, and we know he's aggresive as well. Maybe a Mask of Adaption or a Mask of Fusion would work better.

Since I'm nearly done with Into the Nothing, I'm going to post it's prologue soon.

See ya!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:49, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Posted the Prologue Today!

Chapter 1 will be up soon!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 18:25, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

I guess I should put this out that I posted a Prologue a few days ago. I hope you like it.

Now I've been catching up on Falling in the Black and Vendetta and I've been inspired to do more. I also have a few new characters you need to be introduced to: Now I'm happy to say I've finally figured out the main plot for Dear Agony: The Skakdi government in Metru Nui want to claim an abandoned area of the carver's field in Po-Metru, but Turaga Kongu won't allow it. So with the help of the Vesper Confederacy, they're gonna form a circle around the area they want called The Black Circle, while the Vesper Confederacy plots the assassination of Turaga Kongu.
 * Turaga Kongu- We haven't seen much of Kongu lately...or any other Toa Mahri
 * Leran- "Fixed" Le-Matoran who will be Kolar's sidekick in Top Gun. Has an identidy as a Pre-Existing Canon Matoran
 * Niscylla- Female Vortixx who's a spy in the Vesper Confederacy and works for an organization called the Vortixx Agency. She and Varkon wil have a Love you-Hate you relationship
 * Hylla- Toa of Psioncs who's going to be introduced in the Into the Nothing epilogue
 * Terlim- Toa of Stone who will be introduced in In Too Deep and in Top Gun...as a Hybrid (Partly inspired from Marcus Wright's role in Terminator Salvation)
 * Acrisius- Toa of Fire who plays a role in In too Deep
 * Skynet- Yes...desperate to add this bit of Terminator reference. Now, since in Top Gun the Bohrok are involved, I needed something to control them. Bt I wanted something that wasn't inspired by Bohrok X, the Bahrag, or Makuta. And then it hit me: Why not use a computer? So the Bahrag also got demolished, but instead of a Krana, the Makuta wanted something unstoppable, so they created Skynet. I want to make a body for it so it can fight, but it will mainly use Terlim as it's main use. The Core of Skynet is close to the Bohrok nest, but in a separate chamber

That's all for now, but you can expect more! ;)

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 02:56, September 13, 2013 (UTC)

Turaga Kongu was made because I had a spare Suletu I didn't want to waste. And Niscylla was partially inspired by Racasix, partially by some villain from the 39 clues called Irina Spasky, a russian secret agent.

Remember when I first announced all of this, how I planned for a Bomb drop, well A, the slaves in the Bohrok hive are mining for the Rexidian liquid, and B, Skynet is the computer system on the airships used for the drop. It will lauch a series of attack, Called Archimedes Code 1, Code 2, and Code 3. You'll just wait see what they are...

Po-Metru is going a primary location in the series. Because in Into the Nothing, The Vesper Confederacy's base is located where Makuta's base was in Time Trap. In Top Gun, they're going to a gas station where some Rahkshi attacked. In Dear Agony, as I said before, some Skakdi want part of the carver's field. And in In the End, the Gas station will reappear in the Prologue, and a Safehouse will be the primary location of one chapter.

See ya!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:02, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks ;)

Now I've read reently read Dark Hunters, and it inspired me to make a profile on "Reaper. So here it is

''Dark Hunters come in all size and shapes, such as the Piraka, or me and Ancient. Reaper is one such; his appearance still gives me nightmares.''

''My agents had found the Zeverek on Zakaz, with a seedy occupation as a merchant, selling Muaka meat. It appears he recently had lost an eye and had an oddly shaped weapon as his left hand. My agents saw the hate in his eye, the glimmer of Dark Hunter madness, driven to stuff Muaka dung in your mouth, a Kane-Ra at your rear, and daggers in your back. He was brought to Odina, where I personally interrogated him.''

''Almost immediately, he rose within the ranks. Bu the more power he gained, the more Dark Hunter bodies washed on the shores. He once had a disagreement with Airwatcher once, and that didn't end pretty. However, I've been curious about his looks. I once captured a Toa wearing a mask of pyschometry to find out the truth, though the Toa left the island in a body bag. I must say, if I ever find out the truth of his looks, he won't be leaving alive.''

See ya!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 04:22, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

I know. A few more tweaks and I'll have it ready. I also updated the stories I mentioned above. There is a another story which revolves around Hylla during the war. It's basic story: Hylla is on a trade boat which will take supplies to the Toa fighting in the war. However, a Burnt Sienna and Marshy green Skakdi attacks her, causing some of the supplies to be thrown overboard. However, a Toa of Earth named Auron appears and fights the Skakdi, which it ends when the Skakdi is thrown overboard. The Toa the gives his Toa Stone to Hylla, and then disappears. FYI, Toa Auron with have a javelin with the Lessovik sword once I mange to get my hands on one. He'll also wear a black Calix (Which I'll spray-paint black) and use the Tourik Torso. I'll credit you with it as soon as I upload it (Probably in a few months). He'll appear as a Turaga in the second part of chapter 2 of In the End, but will sadly be killed off in the seventh chapter, when a Boggarak appears and rips him apart.

Nice new mocs blog. Too bad no Toa Alicaer. Oh well.

Hope this satisfies you!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 04:30, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

As I might reveal here, Urodox is going to have the exact same body I'm using for Auron. I will spray-paint a calix, and attatch it an inika head, order a lessovik blade, mount it on a spear, and there! Hylla will have a Metru build, but I still feel like I need to add shin guards.

It's not an origin story, but it puts a bit of backround for Hylla. She's going to debut in Into the Nothing, but I've changed her debut. Instead of an epilogue, I will introduce her mid-story. I'm going to have her and Selac (Surprise) live "off the grid". They'll live in Le-Metru, where Varkon will find them after he meets with the leader of the Vortixx agency, Darex, who will get killed by Reaper, as Darex and Reaper have some history together.

I want to kill off Auron, but 'm having trouble finding a good way for him to die. Seryai, the Le-Matoran I mentioned, will be killed in the Into the Nothing Epilogue, where bikers will hit him. Maybe I'll have a Vesper Confederacy member (Maybe Golroth or Indiva) appear and kill him, where then a fight breaks out and Hylla then accidentally shattering the opponent's mind, killing him/her.

Alicaer is Black and red, with no grey parts (The sole exception of the headpiece), has shin guards, a chest plate, shoulder guards,a weapon similar to 2008's Takanuva's, and a black Mahiki.

See ya!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 03:24, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

His death is significant because when he dies, it will be a Toa Orde situation all over again. When her enemy taunts her, Hylla will go nova on them and shatter their mind. When she sees what she did, she's going to be shocked.

That's great! BTW Nuju was my favorite Turaga. Kualus? Not my favorite Toa Hagah. Probably Pouks or Iruni. I like the Turaga revamp, as then you will have 15 MOCs with the build.

No problem. It's either like school or work.

See ya!

Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:07, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

Didn't leave a message here in a long time. XD I'm guessing uni's going good, 'cause you've been editing a bit more.

I've been tied up in school these days. But i's all been going good, and due to complications I made, I'm postponing Into the Nothing for as long as I can draft the first two chapters.

I've also been creating lots of MOCs who're going to debut in In too Deep. So far they include a Skakdi of Gravity, a Mersion, six Toa who are  Patriots   Toa Noma   Wannbes Order of Mata Nui servants, a mutant Toa of Fire, Three Makuta, Tahu Nuva revamp, Takua, My version of Makuta Verahk, Kapura (Who's going to die at Verahk's hands), a Revamp of Toa Iruni, Three Glatorian, two Agori, a former Dark Hunter, a war leader, and Darex (WIP).

I also have been thinking about it for a long time, and I think I'm going to need help planing out In too Deep. It's because it's going to be...long. About thirty chapters, and it's going to go over these things:


 * Kongu's past

That's just half of what you're going to see. However, I'll tell you what was the past of the Avohkii was.
 * The past of the Avohkii and Turaga Takanuva (Who's going to appear in Into the Nothing) in the Downfall alternate universe
 * The actions of Toa Auron during the war
 * What happened to Tridax's Olmak
 * What happened to Toa Jaller and Toa Nuparu
 * Have Skorr kill someone
 * Have Tamaru appear
 * Have Helryx brutally murdered by Velika
 * What were the actions of Varkon, Leran, and Kolar
 * See what happened to Miserix

In the Downfall alternate universe, the Avokhii was still taken by the brotherhood, however, Norik, Gaaki, Pouks and Kualus were killed in the rebellion. Bomonga went to Daxia, while Iruni kept the Avohkii and passed it on to Tahu Nuva, who rescued Takua from a Nui Jaga and gave him the Avohkii, and Takua put it on in the beginning of the war, becoming Takanuva.

That's all for now! See ya!

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 02:59, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

Far worse...that proves what I sometimes see in the movies.

No problem. I'll just let Vorred know that it wasn't meant to copy Patriots.

Didn't you make an Iruini STARs? That's great, but I still need another Zaktan forearms for his shin guard. And if I remember correctly, he never used Chutespeak.

To me, it's ironic that he's passing on the Avohkii to Tahu, because they have similar personalities. I'm trying to think of a custom form for Tahu, like you did w/ kopaka, but not too influenced from it. So far, I can say bendable arms and legs, along with 2009 or 2011 hands, along with a new sword.

I'm having trouble with Darex's body, because I don't have Roodaka. I have Sidorak, so I'll to give him a similar form. However, the mutant Toa of fire, former Dark Hunter, and war leader are already built, along with the majority of the MOCs. BTW, the former Dark Hinter's codename is Cerebral.

Actually, it's a hell of a long story, and there's just so much stuff in there that it's going to be divided into three books. I'm covering all loose ends, including Urodox's origin, Kongu's transformation, Auron's past, and most importantly, what happened to the Ignika.

I'll take you up an the guest writing offer. And I'm going to try and find a few more guest writers for suggestions as well.

See ya!

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 03:20, October 13, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: I agree
I guess

It's easy. I have a feeling building Miserix is the real problem.

Hmmm, now that I think about it, I hardly remember Nihdiki using Chutespeak. And that's just going to make my story easier. Matau, on the other hand, does use Chutespeak, and he's going to be tricky to write for.

For me, I go with some dark limbs, but I think in this case, I want to make it more modern. I'm taking about just red pieces, but I'll throw Ina few orange elements I have.

I think a I'll post a bio of Cerebral here, if it's okay with you. But he's not as smart as his name says, but yeah, he is smart, and more brains than brawn.

I'm planning for it to take off, probably simultaneously with Top Gun. Chicken Bond is also a good choice, and since Skorr is featured, I think I'll ask him to write for him, as well as a couple of other chapters. Maybe I'll ask Jahoan or Valentin 98.

See ya!

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:21, October 13, 2013 (UTC)

I reread Birth of a Dark Hunter, and Nihdiki did not use a single verse of chutespeak. Makes him easy to write for.

I'll be using Hero Factory limbs, because I have a bunch of those (Obviously) and probably order lots of stuff off bricklinks. However, it should be cheap.

Here's Cerebral's bio:

''Most Dark Hunter join because of revenge. Others join for a chance to loot. Others join because the have been banished. And anyone else joins because because they don't have anywhere to go. Cerebral is an example, he threw his life away.''

''He was one of those 'weaker' matoran on the landmass where Voya Nui was once. They had no Toa to defend themselves. All they had was a Turaga and a pair of weapons each. Still, Cerebral wanted 'actual' protection. So he took a dip in energize Protodermis and a being that was like a Toa of fire, but he had no access to his mak power and looked particularly unpleasant. He was shunned, not for his looks, but for his foolishness and idiocity for what he did to himself.''

''He turned to me, of course,and at first I refused, but when I assigned him on his first mission, which involved a pair of gauntlets and a Makuta, he returned victorious, with the Makuta's mask as a trophy of kill. Still, I didn't trust him, and his next assignment, he was sent to a Brotherhood of Makuta colony with platoons of Visorak, Exo-Toa, Rahkshi and infected Rahi that guarded an ancient scythe of some kind. I sent a spy to monitor him, and what he said was unbelievable: Cerebral was vulnerable to all normal attacks such as Rhotuka, Rahkshi powers, elemantal powers, etc. So for a test, I had Thok use his ability to move inanimate objects against Cerebral, with Cerebral winning. If it''s a side effect of his transformation, then he'll soon my powers are anything but normal.

That's his bio.

Now I also thought about it, and I've made my own version of Skorr, but I want him appear as an actual character. So I'll ask CB if I can create a page for him, and he'd maybe say yes.

Now about In too Deep, I'm going to create a bunch of "Fixed" matoran, and you might know that I don't have a Kanohi elda or Krana Xa. Well they came in the mail last week, but I'm still waiting for a green Hau Nuva and a black Akaku Nuva.

Now since I can build him, how would Fiancha like to appear in In too Deep? Now since I've decided to cancel my first storyline, Damned Desert trilogy, I'm officially taking back anything I've asked for characters in that storyline.

I've read chapter 16 of Falling in the Black, and I think I have a good guess who the Thor wannabe mysterious Toa of fire is.

See ya!

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:51, October 20, 2013 (UTC)

It sadly turns out that I didn't order a Black Akaku nuva and a green Hau Nuva. However, I was able to order the latter on tuesday along with a Red Pakari Nuva and a Green Krana Ja. I'll soon order a medium Blue Huna Nuva, some Vhisola colored 2004 Bohrok feet, another Tahu Nuva leg (I only have one), and the remaining pieces I need for Jala.

I'll maybe order pieces for Tahu off of bricklinks as well, but if you can give me keywords for a few pieces, it'll help.

I'll fix the errors it soon. But it's a low priority.

I'll have Fiancha appear. Just because I won't have a black akaku, doesn't mean he's not appearing. but I'd also like to have Kyros appear. While Fiancha plays as a friend of Terlim's(I don't know if you know Terlim's the main character of In too deep) Kyros is going to be his rival if you allow me to use him.

Either Kazat, Kentis, Sodus. However, it's more likely a matoran who was killed in the mine, one we haven't heard of.

The red Pakari Nuva I don't have specific use for. I just want to have a miscolored Pakari Nuva. The Krana Ja I'll use in Top Gun.

And the green Hau Nuva I'll use for...a miscolored Toa Nuva. He'll be like that brown Onua Nuva.

Chapter 1 of Into The Nothing released!

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:37, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

Oops. A medium blue huna. Unfortunantely, I got late and I'm not able to order one without paying at least $5 more.

I not going to order those off of bricklinks now because the cheapest had been taken.

However, I'm going to the local flea market and I'm probably going to find some more kanohi and pieces I need.

Thanks. Kyros is going to be his usual self while Fiancha will be peaceful. BTW, is Kapla Fiancha under an alias?

I mean, Santis is either Kazat or a Matoran killed during the time Tollubo was in Tethys, before the blood stone had Rotam's essence drawn in.

I got the kanohi and the Krana Ja. I've made a miscolored Tahu Nuva in green.

His name is Alicaer.

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:17, November 2, 2013 (UTC)

Oh well. I'll get a normal blue Huna instead cause I wanted to build Downfall Macku.

However, I did get my monthly haul of pieces and although there's no Miscolored Kaneohe, I did get a Kohrak Krana Bo in the haul. But there were lots of other pieces I can use. maybe now I'm able to build Bomanga.

Ouch. how would a peaceful Onu-Matoran anger a Turaga?

Interesting. karabak is going to touch the blood stone? Sounds good enough.

You have all kinds of Kanohi Nuva. At the moment you have masks to build at least six.

I posted feedback on the blog.

See ya!

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:44, November 4, 2013 (UTC)

My guess the Turaga's Vilnius.

I think there are still some pieces I don't know bout, but I didn't get any misprinted Kanohi. I did manage to get my hands on a Medium blue Krana Bo.

I've built a few more Misprinted Toa Mata, which consist of a red Pohatu, and a blue Kopaka and a blue Onua. I'm planning to build a green Gali, but I don't have any misprinted. However, I can't build a red Onua Nuva because I only have one orange mata leg.

Yeah, for example, you do have a blue Hau Nuva and you didn't put it there. And you have a lot of Turaga Kanohi, including that lime rau.

I have to say, I didn't build much, but so far, I managed to build a Toa Hordika of Iron that will appear in Top Gun (I didn't, under any circumstances, rip off Nordix. I chose Iron because I thought it was a nice combination and we've seen too much of the time.) and In too Deep. I've also built a Levhak and Bordahk, as well as Onepu.

Now I have a request for you. I was browsing through you brickshelf when I saw a Ba-Matoran named Challa. Now since it doesn't look like you have any plans for him, may I use him? He fits the role of a Matoran that will appear in In too Deep, but gets captured by the Brotherhood and sent to the Bohrok nest under Metru Nui, appears in Top Gun and seemingly gets killed, but reappears in In the End.

I usually order off of sellers in the US or Canda, as shipping costs less.

Falling in the Black's ending was amazing. Santis was Kazat all this time? And Torlo a Toa of Shadows? I have a feeling that Santis/Kazat, Caliga, Sonitous, Torlo, and Sarnii are all part of the Warbound.

See ya!

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:03, November 9, 2013 (UTC)

I made my own version of him. I'll credit you and abc, though.

Hmmm...this seems interesting. Did you originally intend Kapla to be Outo's name?

I might make a bricklink order soon. probably a Kanohi (White) and a Kanohi Nuva (Brown). But for now, I'll shut up with my pieces. Additionally, I got an orange Piruk groin in my haul.

He wears a mutated Votilak, and his' character is based off a multicolored Toa of Iron I built in late 2011.

Thank you for explaining. I actually guessed it correct twice in a few of my comments on your blog posts.

Torlo vs. Urodox. This should be interesting. When I created a Toa of Shadows, you also did.

I'm going to say here that chapter 2 of Into the Nothing is being written as we speak- or type. It's going smoothly and will introduce Indiva, a steltian laborer named Groku, the Turaga, and a few of the Toa.

Now I've been creating MOCs for In Too Deep, and most of them are Toa. It's a bit like Patriots, but also a bit like Doctor Who, with all the companions. In fact, just yesterday, I built a Toa of Plasma due to appear. And I made my own color scheme for plasma, red and brown, mainly because I got lots off brown parts I don't want to go to waste.

I also have a Shelek wearing Shadow Matoran (cough cough * Corzakx * cough cough) and I chose the Shelek because I didn't have another Kanohi. I might revamp him in the future or make up a fanon mask power.

I'll say more soon. For now, this is all.

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 19:31, November 9, 2013 (UTC)

Matoro58: Do we archive these soon?
Ah.

Well, it would've been easier to name Outo Kapla and kill the Ta-Matoran off.

Saw that and the other Turaga revamps. To me, it seemed most of the Turaga were like George Bush during the Bionicle Legends era. Nokama is the only one who did anything special.

Would've made a nice pit prisoner...if you didn't blow up Aqua Magna and have Mata Nui deactivate on Bara Magna.

Iron was a nice choice, so I went with that and threw in lots of 1x3 fins in burnt sienna.

I also do reveal spoilers to you.

Chapter 1 is just an introductory Chapter. Chapter 2 is being written, and will mark the first appearances of Turaga Ledan, Turaga Jovan, Turaga Kongu, Turaga Romus, and Turaga Takanuva, as well as two members of the Vesper Confederacy, Toa Hahli and Nuju, and Varkon's allies.

Thanks a lot. Your stories and characters (cough cough*Vilnius*cough cough) are always inspirational. And now that I think of it, my favorite character of yours is either Thode or Torlo.

I want to save my orange parts for Toa of Iron, so this is a custom color scheme I made. Plus, apart from Terlim, I doubt I will make any Toa of stone MOCs.

Yes, lots of Toa are going to be introduced. And I watched the first episode of Doctor Who this Monday and now I can't stop watching the show.

And by the way, I actually did order a Green Hau Nuva and Black Akaku Nuva. I just got confused with my orders. Now I have two green Hau Nuvas and Fiancha A.K.A Kapla has been built.

See ya!

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 04:15, November 17, 2013 (UTC)

Hehehe...how about having Velika just kill off Whenua?

You never expected this amount of Turaga, didn't you. Turaga Romus isn't a new Turaga; It's my new name for Auron, since there's a CBW user with the same name.

Ledan is going to be a bit like Vilnius, except Varkon and him have a bit of...bad history together. Jovan is just my excuse to include another turaga.

New MOCs of mine include a mutated Toa of Air, an Archivist, Romus' matoran form, Fiancha, and Ledan, in my new and custom Turaga form.

Tell me about it. Over the weekend I had to complete an English report, two history things, and a few math problems. Thank god I have three days off for Thanksgiving.

And I gave Golroth his new look. I've decided he's going to be mutated, so I've went for a mutated from.

I meant the 1x3 fins in the Pewku/Gukko color of orange.

The Chris Ecc Doctor is so far my favorite. David Tennant is awesome, but Ecc is funnier.

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:47, November 27, 2013 (UTC)

Uh, why did you leave that text thing on my CBW wiki page? You got me confused.

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:55, December 2, 2013 (UTC)

Posted a reply on the story's talk page.

It's going to be his FitB form, but I want to add a fishing rod.

Enjoyed the break, but now the teachers are cramming everything between now and the break, which starts on the 20th.

Ah. I love the art where it's like the Tenth Doctor says he's a girl and it's like WTF?

I just found out about Toa Hydros' MOC called Reaper. I'm going to change the Zeverek's code name to Ripper. However, I going to give him a real name, Lazarus. I know it sounds like the name of the Doctor Who character, but it's taken off the character Kirk Lazarus from the american War-Comedy movie Tropic Thunder.

Da Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:06, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

Caption this!

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 00:05, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

The guy in the meme is Kirk Lazarus.

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:20, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

What I meant to say was the guy RDJr. is playing as is Kirk Lazarus.

My story's been progressing. The Winter Soldier has replaced War as a Varkon back story, and I've been working on my Self-MOC's (Varkon) page.

And I've decided to base my Turaga off of historical leaders like what you're doing. Here's their current lineup: Just yesterday, my history teacher assigned us an oral report, and that means I need to cut down on my activity for the next week. Hopefully I'll been increasing my activity on my Christmas break.
 * Kongu- George Bush: Kongu's going to be the Metru-Nui's leader during the Vesper Confederacy's attacks on Metru-Nui, which reminds me of the 9/11 attacks.
 * Ledan- Kim Jong-il: A dictatorial figure, but I didn't want to make too evil like Hitler, but Anti-heroic and a dictator
 * Romus- Martin Luther King Jr.: Romus is against violence and is a strong political leader, often accompanying Kongu to politic meetings.
 * Jovan- Franklin Delano Rooservelt: Both were leaders for a long period of time, and since I'm planning for Jovan to die from sickness, it mirrors how FDR died of polio
 * Takanuva- Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela: If Ledan's racist, then I want a Turaga who's fighting for rights for all citizens, not just matoran. It relates to what Mandela did in the 1960s

Enjoyed the cameo.

Since Ripper and Darex have encountered each other in the past, Darex is going to use Ripper's real name, Lazarus, and angering Lazarus enough to kill Darex.

I just saw that you told Vorred (Yes, I do read this kind of stuff)  you got dumped. What do you mean by that?

See ya!

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 21:18, December 14, 2013 (UTC)

Well, I just found out on brickshelf your Zero Hour Toa are becoming Turaga (Nooooooooooo, I wanted Salu to die!) And who the gold faxon-wearing Toa of Stone?

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 15:03, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

(Yells with angry mob) Kill off Salu! ;)

I agree. Gold and Brown don't go well together.

I'm really sorry. Bush wouldn't have been my choice as well.

Maybe some various dictators, but honestly, I don't have one in mind for Ledan. I'll see how his development goes, then I'll decide a Dictator for him.

Romus is my image of a strong, but wise leader. He knows how to use his power correctly and has more experience than Kongu as a Turaga.

I glad that you agree with this opinion. Those quotes really fit something an elder Takanuva would say, and fits well, since he's a Turaga of light.

Jovan is the only one who I haven't talked about, but he's going to be the eldest of the group, an experienced and wise leader.

Oh man. This must be pretty hard for you. I'm really sorry for you. At least now w can have Racasix killed off.

See ya!

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 23:39, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

...We still hate Salu. XD

I KNEW IT! I DAMN KNEW IT!

The movie version worked well, but sets with brown and gold don't (Or never) work.

Makes sense...since I suggested it when I first mentioned my Turaga here.

Mandela and Takanuva do have similarities and fit each other's personalities.

Ledan became a Turaga shortly after Jovan did...Thode became a Toa then.

Ouch. Heard you were in depression, which sucks. I haven't been in a relationship before, but you can complain to me.

If only that happened in Doctor Who...

I noticed you voted to The Winter Soldier in the CWW Contest. Thanks a lot!

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 19:50, December 29, 2013 (UTC)

That should look better. If you must know from y opinion, gold doesn't work well with red, brown, and black.

My group of personal leaders...and also retired, constipated, old Toa.

That should feel bad UNDERSTATEMENT. She really made it worse for you just as the year ended. But don't look back on that, just look at the happy stuff.

I hope to get Chapter 2 of Into the Nothing released before January 1st. I'm nearly done with it, and it includes several whovian references. I think you'll like it.

Also, I don't know if you heard this, but thanks for voting for The Winter Soldier. ;)

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 14:52, December 30, 2013 (UTC)

Dammit, Lego! You spoiled Pohatu's and Hewkii's looks!

That was a joke. A JOKE!!!

That must've been a tough choice...if you feel like you did the right thing, then stick to your decision.

Don't think of it as that way. You have all of us here at CBW (Or there.We're messaging on a different wiki). Vorred, Chicken Bond, Aljarreau, myself, and others. We're all here (There) for you, and we've all went or will go through breakups at some points in our lives.

Posted Into the Nothing Chapter 2 today (New years' eve). And since yesterday, Jahoan17, Randomaster07, and FireStar97 have all voted for my story. But I'm grateful that you voted The Winter Soldier first...along with your personal review.

Have a Happy New Year and tell me of any Hangovers !

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 00:29, January 1, 2014 (UTC)

I have to agree. Orange for stone doesn't make sense. The Tan sets like Vorox or Zesk worked well, as well as dark yellow shade of Mata Nui and Telluris.

Those are two things you can count on: a Family and CBW.

And the voting should've ended today and it looks like...I won. XD. And again, thanks a whole lot for voting for The Winter Soldier for the writing contest. No I just need to wait for Jman to message me. XD

I'm having a good one, but I'm not making any resolutions, as I break them within half a day.

I can see that you're girlfriend wanted to socialize, but to drink?! The latter was kind of a stupid reason.

See ya!

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 17:16, January 1, 2014 (UTC)

Even though Pohatu was brown in his two first forms, I agree with you. He need to be a brown guy in 2008. And what's more is that Hewkii was never released with any brown pieces. However, the Tan pieces from 2001-2003 do have some great effect, though Metru and Avak Brown were nice as well.

Writing The Winter Soldier also made me realize that I write better if I write stories for my own storyline. And I hope that they will announce the winner soon (Even though everybody knows it's me. XD), cause the suspense is killing me. XD

That's more of a test than a resolution.

Make up doesn't really gross me as much as dog shit  dung. Because dog poop makes want to throw up. Make up? Not so much.

See ya!

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 00:41, January 2, 2014 (UTC)

It's not just their colors, it's their shape.Lewa looked more like a Toa of Stone than a Toa of Air, and Onua ( know he's knot Phantoka but still) Loked more agile than any of the Phantoka/Mistika Toa and he's a Toa of Earth. XD

I actually like Visorak feet due to your use with Visorak feet as shinguards, and I've used those Light brown V-feet as shinguards for a Skakdi of Iron that'll be appearing as part of the Vesper Confederacy in Into the Nothing.

Speaking of Into the Nothing, Chapter 2 got released on the 31st, just in time for the New Year.

It's all right if go and edit the spelling errors. BTW, It's still three ahead of everyone. I messaged Jman98 if the voting ended. Still, even though I don't have a youtube channel, I hope to make one very soon, and place a like on The Winter Soldier.

I know.

See ya!

I know who I am! I&#39;m a dude called Matoro58 (talk &bull; contribs) 16:02, January 2, 2014 (UTC)