User blog comment:SayuriDarling/The Staff of Serapis Official Discussion/@comment-24557362-20140220042854/@comment-24564584-20140221010757

Yes it's a little bland. It's like they meet, they fight, they fight a monster, it ends. This one will be better though, because 1) it's in Annabeth's perspective 2) Sadie tends to spice things up, just like Percy and 3) I just feel like it'll be better.