User blog comment:SayuriDarling/The Mark of Athena Official Discussion/@comment-3146930-20121005000339/@comment-4485028-20121005010548

You hit on everything I was thinking. If Hazel had more combat parts and RR thought of a different way to not have Jason dominate without having to knock him out for everything, I think the book probably could have been much better. Also, although I thought alot of Leo's antics with Frank were really funny, I felt like he kind of stepped over the line once or twice.