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Bella6547866699 wrote: Klimenreal wrote: Bella6547866699 wrote: Klimenreal wrote: She didn't even sound like she was scared tho, or paralyzed. She was just almost caused Percy's getting killed. "For a horrible moment, Piper couldn't find her voice." (MoA pg. 132) Wow, that sounds an awful lot like what someone who is scared would say, doncha think? I mean, if she wasn't, I'm sure the word "horrible" wouldn't even be in there. And she did not almost "cause" Percy's almost-death. That's the eidolion's and Gaea's faults. She almost failed to stop him from getting killed. There's a difference. So, you're wanting me to add the rest of the paragraph?

Your quote is when Piper thought that Gaea was whispering to her, that was the reason why she couldn't find her voice. Not when she was almost caused Percy's death. (Yeah, it was so because of just Gaea and eidolions. All people here aware that eidolions were the ones who possessed them, but it will change Piper's actions? Answer; no.) After, she starts to realize that they were eidolions who possessed them, so after these things happened;

Piper tried to stop them, with shouting at them ect. then Percy, whom possessed by an eidolion, raised his sword over Jason's chest, and then;

Panic closed up Piper's throat.

At least if you're wanting to defent Piper's actions, use this quote, it would be a little more reasonable. Panic closed Piper's throat, it would be more reasonable thing with saying that she couldn't say a thing, and....

''She wanted to attack Percy with her dagger, but she knew that wouldn't help. Whatever was controlling him had all of Percy's skill. There was no way she could beat him in combat.''

Charming. And, after Piper realized that her attacking Percy won't work because she could not defeat him, so she after tried to control eidolion with talking. They had talk about how Gaea wants a female demigod and a male demigod blood and such, then, Piper's talking with eidolions, and more talking with Piper trying to stop them ect, and these things happened;

Blackjack begins to appear and emerged, and Piper looked at Blackjack, said that he is going to knock Percy out, and ''Blackjack reared and brought his hoof down on Percy’s head. Percy crumpled to the pavement next to Jason.'' and then Piper runs towards them, checking Jason then Percy, and goes back to the ship with them. Oh, so you were referring to Blackjack hoofing Percy to the head? Given the lack of context I thought we were still talking about Jason coming real close to stabbing Percy. No, I was saying the 'thing' was happened before that, before what you quoted. If Piper was, you know, couldn't find her voice, after that scene happened, it would be more reasonable, but it was happened before that, not after. After, those scenes happened, the things I wrote.